• Tell me about the odds

    by  • July 29, 2012 • * Safe for Work *, Love - Pure and Simple • 12 Comments

    Tell me about the odds and I’ll tell you about her eyes. Eyes you could get lost in, eyes that lock you in and freeze time when you look at them. Eyes that isolate moments and paralyze you until they decide to set you free.

    Tell me about the odds and I’ll tell you about her smile. A smile that could brighten any day and strike you with bliss. A smile that keeps you young and honest, a smile that you would never want to chase away.

    Tell me about the odds and I’ll tell you about her hair. Hair that I would know anywhere, in any crowd. Hair that flourishes in the slightest breeze, and hair that I pine to run my fingers through over and over.

    Tell me about the odds and I’ll tell you about her heart. A heart that embraces youthful exuberance and has an abundance of love to give. A heart that needs as much love as it’s willing to give, but is cautious to roam freely. A heart that calls to me day and night, every second of every minute of every hour.

    Tell me about the odds and I’ll tell you that I couldn’t care less. I couldn’t care less that the odds are we’ll never be together again. I couldn’t care less that she says she no longer loves me, because I will love her forever. I’ll be her anything but I just want to be hers.

    So tell me about the odds and I’ll tell you that the odds were never and are never in my favor. Love doesn’t care about the odds.

    12 Responses to Tell me about the odds

    1. K
      July 29, 2012 at 10:40 am

      It surely doesn’t.

    2. that girl
      July 29, 2012 at 10:55 am

      I read this over and over. I wish this was written for me, but like you said love doesn’t care about the odds.

    3. M
      July 29, 2012 at 8:43 pm

      Tell her before it’s too late!

    4. Author
      August 1, 2012 at 11:47 am

      trust me she knows, she’s siding with the odds

    5. Angel
      August 1, 2012 at 7:53 pm

      I’d swim oceans of time to have these kind of odds…

    6. that girl
      August 1, 2012 at 8:16 pm

      Well I’m very sorry to hear that. :(

    7. that girl
      August 1, 2012 at 9:03 pm

      maybe she is confused?

    8. Author
      August 2, 2012 at 8:00 am

      I’ll probably never know

    9. that girl
      August 2, 2012 at 1:04 pm

      Do you want to ask or you just want to move on? Just curious…

    10. Angel
      August 2, 2012 at 3:24 pm

      : ( Sorry to hear that…

      Your words are so touching to me. I know how it feels to be paralyzed with just someone’s eyes and to have such a precious heart to go with it…*sigh* … it’s maddening to want to be with that special someone that much.

      I hope the odds will eventually lean in your favor.

      Take Care

    11. Author
      August 2, 2012 at 10:05 pm

      I just want to follow my heart and I’m not going to let go until it feels right if it ever feels right. Right now my heart says to fight for her. I’ve done all I can for now, only time will tell if we’re meant to be

    12. that girl
      August 3, 2012 at 1:47 pm

      Author,
      You’re last comment made me smile inside. Love is definitely worth fighting for and to see you doing that is beautiful. Keep on believing, keep on hoping, and don’t give up.

    Leave a Reply

    Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *